martes, 30 de marzo de 2010

Dark side of my mind

Lonely as a street dog, blind as a bat, slow as turtle… fooling around in this strange town.
Like a bleeding animal running away from it’s hunter, hiding in the forest, while the heartbeats increase their speed and a cold breeze starts floating from within.
Another night, another trap… more blood…
The moon highlights the red river across trees and leaves such as a bright light searching for the one that has left the prison in the middle of the dark… only a shotgun was heard.
Broken bones, fallen trees, the precious noisy silence of the woods… and a cold breeze floating from within has taken my harmed body…

4 comentarios:

Emi García! dijo...

Genial chabón!! Un gran abrazo desde Mendoza!!

"FeLiX" Pablo Contartese dijo...

Tardía respuesta!!
Emi!! muchas gracias!
Espero que leas los otros!
Un gran abrazo!!

PD: Ya andaremos este año nuevamente por sus pagos con Científicos!
PD2: Sino yo me mando un finde sólo para visitarlos!! Me deben el vino en sachet aparte!!

Jpollock dijo...

Cool piece of writing!

I wonder which song should be part of the soundtrack...

Very powerful images. I can almost see you walking in the forest.

Unleash you inner English writer as often as possible!

no.excuses dijo...

como muy pocos escritores, lográs zambullir al lector en tu universo, invitándolo a participar del relato... dejándolo sentir través de tu palabras...